Saturday, February 7, 2009

This is Liam's story

The following story is entirely Liam's story. He told us what to write down.
Enjoy!

"One day Liam went out. For a long time he walked until he saw a big cave. Two eyes were staring out of the darkness. Then the eyes were disappearing and, as he watched in horror, a big red creature came walking out of the cave. He saw it was a big, enormous fox. He was afraid. Then after a while he climbed into a tree. Then the big red creature jumped into the tree and Liam swung a branch down, which hit the fox on the tongue and the fox said: 'Ahhhbwhaaaawbahh' and fell out of the tree. Then Liam climbed down and he ran and ran until came to an enormous building. He looked around and he saw a little light. He went towards the light and he saw two squirrels huddling together, they said: 'Mama, Mama, Mama!' over and over. Then Liam picked up the squirrels. Then they saw the fox coming. They ran and ran and ran. Then they came to a very big church where they found the Mama squirrel. The two little squirrels said, 'Mama!'. Liam gave the squirrels to the mom, they were so happy they hugged her. They saw the fox jumping towards them. They went outside and Liam pushed a log towards the fox. They all ran round and round the church. The fox fell on the ground when he tripped on the log. He was hurt so he went home. Liam went home and he went to bed.
And that's the end of the story, OK?"



1 comment:

beth said...

That's a great story! I wish I could see Liam telling it and really getting into the story. Very cute!